Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is positive or negative?
Nowadays , people mostly prefer to
travel
rather than other transportation. Whereas, some folks think that travel
by flight
would be declined of
some Change preposition
for
reasons
. I believe that Fix the agreement mistake
reason
air
transport have
both sides of effects, positive and negative. I will give an explanation of both effects in the ensuing paragraphs.
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has
To begin
with, there are plethora
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a plethora
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of advanatages
advanatages
of Correct your spelling
advantages
travelled
by Wrong verb form
travelling
flight
. Firstly
, when people moving one place to another place by air
, it is very
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a very
time saving
mode of Add a hyphen
time-saving
travel
. For example
, folks use domestic airplanes
to commute Change the spelling
aeroplanes
other
states, it would take time 4 to 5 hours whileChange preposition
to other
,
other transportation like Remove the comma
apply
train
or personal Fix the agreement mistake
trains
vehicle
take 10 to 12 hours. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Secondly
, it is very convenient and comfortable. Moreover
, these days most of
goods and products Change preposition
apply
transported
by Add a missing verb
are transported
air
. For instance
, Amzon
provides delivery within Correct your spelling
Amazon
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a fewdays
fewdays
from another country. It Correct your spelling
few days
is
only happened by Unnecessary verb
apply
air
transportation.
On the other hand
, every situation has pros and cons. Therefore
, there are also
several negative effect
of Change to a plural noun
effects
air
travel
. The flight
produced high
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a high
proportation
of carbon dioxide emission , Correct your spelling
proportion
proportions
it
leads to Correct pronoun usage
which
air
pollution. In addition
, it is very costly as
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apply
comperted
to other modes of transport some folks can not afford Correct your spelling
compared
higher
price of tickets. Add an article
the higher
Consequently
, it may be a decreased
in Change the form of the verb
decrease
air
travel
in the near future.
In conclusion, although
, flight
is very easy and convenient for those people who are wealthy. WhileAdd an article
the flight
a flight
,
it Remove the comma
apply
is
Change the verb form
also leads
also
leads to air
pollution by carbon dioxide emission. In my opinion
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,opinion
this
trend is
leads Unnecessary verb
apply
some
positive effects on Change preposition
to some
environment
.Add an article
the environment
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