Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is positive or negative?

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Nowadays , people mostly prefer to
travel
rather than other transportation. Whereas, some folks think that
travel
by
flight
would be declined
of
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some
reasons
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reason
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. I believe that
air
transport
have
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has
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both sides of effects, positive and negative. I will give an explanation of both effects in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are
plethora
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a plethora
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of advanatages
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advanatages
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advantages
of
travelled
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travelling
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by
flight
.
Firstly
, when people moving one place to another place by
air
, it is
very
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a very
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time saving
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mode of
travel
.
For example
, folks use domestic
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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to commute
other
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states, it would take time 4 to 5 hours while
,
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other transportation like
train
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trains
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or personal
vehicle
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vehicles
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take 10 to 12 hours.
Secondly
, it is very convenient and comfortable.
Moreover
, these days most
of
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goods and products
transported
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are transported
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by
air
.
For instance
,
Amzon
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Amazon
provides delivery within
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a fewdays
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fewdays
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few days
from another country. It
is
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only happened by
air
transportation.
On the other hand
, every situation has pros and cons.
Therefore
, there are
also
several negative
effect
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effects
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of
air
travel
. The
flight
produced
high
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a high
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proportation
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proportion
proportions
of carbon dioxide emission ,
it
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which
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leads to
air
pollution.
In addition
, it is very costly
as
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apply
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comperted
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compared
to other modes of transport some folks can not afford
higher
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the higher
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price of tickets.
Consequently
, it may be a
decreased
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decrease
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in
air
travel
in the near future. In conclusion,
although
,
flight
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the flight
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is very easy and convenient for those people who are wealthy. While
,
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it
is
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also leads
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also
leads to
air
pollution by carbon dioxide emission. In my
opinion
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this
trend
is
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leads
some
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to some
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positive effects on
environment
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the environment
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sustainable alternatives
  • aviation sector
  • economic consequences
  • renewable fuels
  • climate change efforts
  • global connectivity
  • tourism industry
  • technological advancements
  • cultural exchanges
  • international trade
  • travel experience
  • airport congestion
  • job losses
  • carbon footprint
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