Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 22 minutes passed, 10;39

Promoting

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and

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at the cost of public

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is not a wise decision . Many people argue that

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should prioritise public needs as the

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priority. Investing in

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and

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is not a wise decision . Let's discuss

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, Public

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should be prioritised

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as the population needs good infrastructure like roads, electricity etc. If a country has good infrastructure

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the economy will get boosted and people will be motivated to improve their living standards .

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public

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spending needs to be done wisely by the

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. For ,instance a country like India which is the 2nd most populous country should prioritise its spending on public

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instead

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of promoting

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. Since Indian

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is so rich and diverse it became imperative to ignore its importance in daily life. But India is a developing economy it should focus on working on economic development.

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, Promoting music and theatre is

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important as it displays how rich the

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is . As a

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I feel amazed when I see cultural performances in school and theatre.

Arts

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and

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are our heritage and they should be preserved.

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countries like India which has a rich cultural heritage must preserve its

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and

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.

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should work on promoting

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but that must be carefully considered keeping in mind priorities for a sustainable economy.As it really boils down to budget or fund priorities.

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should not ignore the importance of

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and music. In conclusion, I agree with the point of view that

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should not overspend on

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and

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. It should keep in mind the priorities of the working population's needs and aspirations and should focus on building infrastructure.