Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people living in
industrial
Era start to think seriously about the environment and the Correct article usage
the industrial
issues
which start to appear related to besides
how to solve and manage them. People argue Change preposition
apply
on
the most environmental problem facing our planet recently. Most of them Change preposition
about
believes
it is the loss of certain types of Change the verb form
believe
plants
and animal, while others see there is
more important Change the verb form
are
issues
to handle. This
essay will argue both views and reveals how loss
of these species is entirely important to solve.
Add an article
the loss
Firstly
, some people believe that issues
like pollution
of
traffic jams is a serious Correct your spelling
or
problem
and should Fix the agreement mistake
problems
has
Change the verb form
have
the
priority in Correct article usage
apply
problems
solving plans. This
because
of different gases which Add a missing verb
is because
results
from Change the verb form
result
pollution
and naturally it affects our plant layers negatively, besides
producing more CO2 in air
which Correct article usage
the air
cause
a lot of diseases and health Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
problems
. For instance
, big cities nowadays have the highest rate of non pure
Add a hyphen
non-pure
air
and studies shows
that most Correct subject-verb agreement
show
of
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respiratory
health Add an article
the respiratory
problems
start basically form
Correct your spelling
from
air
we Correct article usage
the air
breath
. Leaving all these Replace the word
breathe
problems
and focusing on plants
and animals only will eventually damage our community completely.
Nevertheless
, I argue that although
pollution
Correct article usage
the pollution
issue
should be considered, the obvious decreasing rate of Fix the agreement mistake
issues
plants
and animal species are serious danger sign
, which should be urgently controlled. To illustrate, having Fix the agreement mistake
signs
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
plants
resulting
in a decrease in the overall amount of green areas, which Replace the word
results
responsible
for producing the Add a missing verb
is responsible
air
we breath
. Giving less attention to Replace the word
breathe
this
increasing problem will affect the entire Nutritional Pyramid which is the reason for continuing the
life on our planet.
To sum up, Correct article usage
apply
although
there are important environmental issues
such
as pollution
and traffic, I believe its
more serious to focus on solving the decreasing amounts of Correct your spelling
it's
plants
and animal species which plays environmental and personal roles in humanity
existence.Change noun form
humanity's
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