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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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There has been a
significat
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significant
 growth of fast
food
 restaurants in the world together with
its
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their
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 inexpensive prices. Fast
food
 is believed that it is unhealthy for
people
 because of its chemical content;
however
, the benefits of the
food
palys
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plays
 more
portion
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 in both undeveloped and developed
countries
. The availability of fast
food
 in many places is a disadvantage because the
food
 is believed unsafe to be eaten. Making fast
food
 serve faster than other
food
,
there
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and there
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 are some chemical materials in the
food
 that are assumed dangerous for
people
 in the future. So by eating it, illnesses
such
 as obesity will be found in the human body.
Thus
, the drawback
from
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of
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 the
food
 is that it will badly impact
people
.
On the other hand
, there are some benefits of cheaper and widespread fast
food
. One of which is that
people
 in developing
countries
 could afford the
food
 without paying much
maney
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money
. It is commonly known that poor
countries
 still have problems with starvation because of having less budget. With the existence of cheaper fast
food
, poor
people
 could purchase it with a lower budget, so that starving will not be a problem anymore in the
countries
. In developed
countries
, fast
food
 restaurants could help
people
 in the
countries
 to accelerate waiting
time
in
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serving
food
. While commuting to work is really rapid in
the
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countries
 with almost no
time
 for meals, the restaurants could provide them with
food
 in a very short
time
 and they can even eat on the way to work.
Therefore
,
this
 advantage could provide a short
time
 for
people
 to have meals. In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of fast
food
 in many
countries
.
However
, the advantages are more massive in both poor and rich
countries
 in accelerating
food
 serving and its affordability.
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