the internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also caused problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems related to internet an what solutions can you suggest?
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people
's behavior
of treating Change the spelling
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information
quicker and wider. However
, it is argued that the progress of internet
generates crucial Correct article usage
the internet
problems
, which did not exist until the emergence of internet
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the internet
This
essay will address some of the problems
caused by internet
, and propose solutions.
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To begin
with, one of the most serious problem
is money fraud. As Individuals use Fix the agreement mistake
problems
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,
or manage their saving by net banking, the number of individual Remove the comma
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information
inputted to internet
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the internet
these trend
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this trend
these trends
these
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this information
information
via internet
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the internet
Nevertheless
, almost all criminals associating
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associated
internet
crimes are not captured, it is because of the crime opacity. To solve these situations, The companies, which serve internet
service
, Fix the agreement mistake
services
such
as online shopping, net
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and net
bunking
, should utilize the technology, especially for managing customers' identity Correct your spelling
banking
information
. As to some
Japanese banks, Change preposition
Some
for example
, they
use "one-stop persuade", which is the function to check identity twice.
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problem
concerns the
addiction Correct article usage
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of
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to
internet
. As the Correct article usage
the internet
internet
is blending into people
's life
, the average Replace the word
lives
time
of using internet
is much longer than a decade. Some Add an article
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the people
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on
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sleep
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internet
. It means that these people
are almost the addict of internet
. Correct article usage
the internet
For instance
, in Japan, many people
cannot stop playing game
, which Fix the agreement mistake
games
is
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as
internet
game
, even if they have Fix the agreement mistake
games
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intension
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intention
internet
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then
, some of them have the tendency to suicide. These
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situation
become one of Change the determiner
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Japanese
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the Japanese
problems
. For this
problem
, governments should make the restriction to
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time
of using internet
, especially Add an article
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children
, who cannot control their Change preposition
for children
mind
. I believe these Fix the agreement mistake
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restriction
have the big possibility to suppress Change the determiner
restrictions
this
problem
even if the target is only children.
In conclusion, to solve these internet
problems
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the company
a company
company
should take care of treating Fix the agreement mistake
companies
information
. In addition
, governments should restrict the time
of
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on
internet
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