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Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples.

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Should
Youngsters
 be involved in unpaid
work
, and could it affect their
career
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? For the longest time in
history
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youngsters
 have been used as a cheap source of
labor
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. It is believed that a child can
work
 as much as an adult
,
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 while being paid less.
Till
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this
 day it is still common for some poverty-stricken countries to go around the law and involve
children
 in hard
work
. For
this
 reason, I am convinced that many
people
 still think that working from a young
age
 is acceptable and should be treated as an everyday thing. One justification would be that
people
 who think that
youngsters
 should involve themselves in unpaid
work
 don’t see the possibility of the
work
 ruining the
youngster
's childhood. Most
of
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people
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 who decide that their
children
 should start working from a young
age
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 are parents who want their
children
 to be successful or live in an economically poor country. A popular misconception can be seen that
youngsters
 who start working from an early
age
 will be up to speed with the older
children
 mainly due to the fact that parents want their
children
 to be as smart as possible. But by doing that to a
youngster
 parents can create a barrier between
the
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childhood and
the
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adolescence. Undeniably it would
also
 block the importance of freedom and creativity, which is a fundamental
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 to have growing up Personally, I tend to believe that
youngsters
 who do not get paid for their
work
 will lose a sense of motivation to do something for a reward. It can permanently damage their will to try harder in school
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 because the grade wouldn’t be
worthy
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of
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the
work
 for them. A
further
 reason not to involve
youngsters
 in unpaid
work
 would be that without
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proper experience,
youngsters
 can be involved in accidents which put their health at risk. Supporters of
this
 type of
youngster
 involvement in unpaid
work
 believe that working should be beneficial to the growing child in order to deter them from becoming lazy and unproductive members part of the community.
However
, there is very little evidence to suggest that working from a young
age
 can be beneficial for the future. In conclusion, involving
youngsters
 in unpaid
work
 is too much of a risk and, in my opinion, ineffective, both for
work
 and career reasons. Taking that into consideration it would be useful to talk with the
children
 and get to know what they would want to do for a job, which would gradually improve the workflow and overall productivity. I strongly believe that
involvement
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 of
youngsters
 in unpaid
work
 should be based on communication between the
people
 and their
children
 as it wouldn't harm the career
for
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 the
youngster
 so much.
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