The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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of the crowd in our world is doing appear new big problems. Some agree that

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we can see the cities overpopulated and

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is the most bigger problem that

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humanity is

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.

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, my opinion is that I

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statement because

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situation is producing a

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of chain issues.

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of all, we can see that we are producing every time more and more pollutants and the reason for

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because a

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people

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not really conscious

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it.

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, is known that we need to

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recycle

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as plastic and paper in different bags and

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will help our earth. In a similar fashion, the environment is suffering

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cause of the toxic fumes that the factories are leaving.

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, almost every

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family

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one or more cars and

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is happening in many countries.

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, the air has a

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contaminants because these cars are leaving a dangerous fume

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carbon monoxide from

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fossil fuels and as a

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we can see in the metropolis air a

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of smog.

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, we

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about the global warming issue

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the carbon dioxide from the farms in order to make food. Overall, more

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means more contamination.

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, when more

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we are, we will need more resources.

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, is known that we are suffering a struggle time because

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lacking of these products.

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, many states have water shortages.

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, we are not the only ones

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affected

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our deeds, the animals are suffering a

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because

deforestation

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of deforestation

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that we are making in order to do more crops. Unfortunately, another problem is in the oceans, just some are realized about

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big trouble, the

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issue. To conclude, every time we are more and more

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in

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world and

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is affecting a

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fauna, flora and

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in general. For

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reason

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is the biggest problem nowadays and we need to cope with that and do a collective effort in order to change something.