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Topic Technology has caused the traditional skills and ways of lifevto die. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree ?

#topic #technology #skills #lifevto
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 to produce
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every year for several decades. They will be given a lot of
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 to our daily life but
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other
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hand
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 they will be had some effect
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traditional
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expecialy
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especially
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 of
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 to maintain those in
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pallarel
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parallel
 way. I really agree with them
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 all concerns. For a start,
nowaday
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nowadays
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, people have many
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 to make their daily routine be
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convenience
 more than in the past
such
 as mobile
phone
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phones
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 or
internet
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. They desire to use them
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normal
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 day.
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, we don't have
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machine
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machines
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 in the past but
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currently have
this
to
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be easier
more
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than. They just put some delicious
coffee
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 in the machine and wait only one or two minutes and will
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 a special
coffee
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selected in their home. But in the past, they must
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have many traditional
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 to blend a good
coffee
 and take more time
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waiting
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 it. I think some traditional
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 will disappear in
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 world because of
modern
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coffee
style
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such
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machine
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machines
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.
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Moreover
, as mentioned
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above. We had
new
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 solution for touch screen
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devices
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such
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.
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before, people read a book
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letter
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 them too but
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these days
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 we have
electronic
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book
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books
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in
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 one device
then
 we called and
also
 can send a message or write
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 letter and send them to
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person
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people
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in
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same
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 time, we called "e-mail". For all make them easy to convey without
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modern
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 era.
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above can explain the huge change
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 daily life in only
few
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decade
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. I trust that many people will
be
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choose a new way to make
thier
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their
 life
conviniance
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convenience
 and miss some custom
thing
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things
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such
paper
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as paper
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post
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, old communication
process
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processes
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 or many old
once
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ones
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. And
technolgy
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technology
 will be developed every day to make the world better.
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