The continued rise in population is greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the cause of this continue rise? What would be measures to address the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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object is moving. Actually, its speed is
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low –
one
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one
Earth
’s month.
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but
also
around the
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our
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only satellite of our
planet
is always turned to us by
one
side.
This
effect is known as “synchronous rotation”.
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, the
Earth
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this
celestial body always remains hidden from view; it can only be seen from the opposite side - from the
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earth
. Radio-Pulsars.
This
is very
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material for consideration. It is hard to imagine any other intriguing theory
such
as
this
one
, which I am going to share with you. Some scientists believe, that pulsars not only just a random source of emission, which comes to our
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but
also
is a method of communication between us and
aliens
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not aware – the object named “pulsar” is the source of electromagnetic radiation, which emits these waves within
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couple of seconds during its rotation. All of these beams of energy cross the whole Universe, which might be considered
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radio waves or
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. In fact,
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aspects
such
as a lack of information or technical preparation of mankind.
However
, until now, it was not achievable for us to set up communication with
aliens
. All emission recordings had not any similarities,
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of the signals are different.
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scientist back to the interpretation, that something is encoded
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their
behavior
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. What do you think about
this
matter? Is it possible that
aliens
can interact with us in a
such
way or it is no more than a guess, based on personal
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? The
Planet
X. In 1995, an American woman who led an online discussion told
people
about a theory that was not easy to figure out. According to her, she was abducted not so long ago by
aliens
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insert something like a tiny bug into her head, through which
aliens
could broadcast thoughts and warnings in order to save humanity.
One
of the
first
messages was a warning about a certain
planet
X, which is moving towards the
earth
and will inevitably collide with it. Curiously, according to the
aliens
, the
planet
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and is not tied to any system.
Thus
,
people
do not even guess, given the size of the cosmic body moving in our direction. After the collision, a massive catastrophe will be inevitable and the end of the world will probably occur. It's funny, but a
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woman was able to create
such
an informational occasion to reassure
people
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Nasa said that the most powerful satellites would have
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this
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several decades before and would have informed
people
. But everyone understands that they would not tell us anything, because in
this
case, chaos and disorder have
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to begin
. If we count several decades from the moment of the statement,
then
the time of the collision, according to
this
woman, just falls on the
next
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