In
the
recent Correct article usage
apply
years
more and more Add a comma
,years
people
are focused on their desires so they choose Use synonyms
temprorary
jobs. Correct your spelling
temporary
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type of Linking Words
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people
spends only several months on work per year and Fix the agreement mistake
person
use
the rest of the Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
time
to do what they want.
On the one hand, it is an Use synonyms
insame
idea because Correct your spelling
insane
in same
this
attitude has bag effect on our career and self-realization. The only way to reach high goals is by working hard so spending a big part of the year on Linking Words
leisure
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time
is destroying factor. Use synonyms
For example
, famous and successful Linking Words
people
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such
as Elon Musk are working long hours to be successful. Success is always about hard Linking Words
working
. Replace the word
work
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, it is Linking Words
highly
viral example because many Add an article
a highly
people
are dreaming about Use synonyms
this
lifestyle so our society will suffer from Linking Words
the
massive crisis if a big part of Correct article usage
a
people
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decide
to spend more Change the verb form
decides
time
on Use synonyms
leisure
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time
.
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On the other hand
, our society will become much happier if it happens because Linking Words
leisure
activities make us happy so the level of stress will decrease. In order to Use synonyms
that
the number of illnesses which are connected with stressful Add a missing verb
do that
lifestyle
will Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
also
decrease so Linking Words
people
will become healthier. Use synonyms
For instance
, illnesses Linking Words
such
as cancer will take Linking Words
less
lives because the main reason Change the quantifier
fewer
of
it will decrease. Change preposition
for
Furthermore
, Linking Words
people
might find their passion which is really important to have. More individuals will connect their job with Use synonyms
the
passion so it should Correct article usage
apply
increases
the number of individuals Change the verb form
increase
which
are satisfied with their job.
To sum up, in my opinion taking more Correct pronoun usage
who
time
on Use synonyms
leisure
activities has more advantages than disadvantages because free Use synonyms
time
activities make us happier and Use synonyms
also
help us to find our passion.Linking Words