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obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

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There is an ongoing discussion regarding obesity. It is the main arising issue around the globe.
This
 problem has a slew of demerits.As far as I am concerned, roughly 60 per cent population in the world are facing
such
 a challenge. In my opinion, whether obesity is due to some natural disease or your own lack of care in both cases it is harmful.
First
 of ,all I would like to elaborate on the cause of it.
Firstly
,some people don't want to hold the option of walking.sitting idle is the main cause.
Secondly
,when I cast my mind back,I can figure out, that junk food plays a vital role in order to gain fat.
Thirdly
, the foods of restaurants contain some inorganic ingredients.which can
also
 be a severe reason.
Lastly
,some humans used some sort of medicine. They may control one issue but mostly
as a result
 they
also
 affect health. And considered an issue in order to exaggerate the weight. On the other side, I will sketch out some solutions to
this
 problem.
In addition
,
first
 of ,all after taking the meal people should go outside for a walk.
Furthermore
, humans should prefer to do some physical activity whether it may be sports or hose work.
For example
, despite using an elevator people can use stairs.
Moreover
, always try to eat organic food.
For instance
, in their free ,time humans can grow food.It will be physical activity and you can get some original nutrients. At
last
,from my standpoint, good health can give a good life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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