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Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent decades, education in many nations has played an important role in our lives, especially for
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 and society as a whole.
While
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 many people argue that
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-related
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 should be enforced/forced in high
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, I personally disagree with
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 statement for the following reasons. There are several reasons why people believe that
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 idea seems beneficial.
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, drawing and painting
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 help
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 to relax their minds,
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 they could study more effectively afterwards.Indeed, they have been under huge pressure resulting from examinations and strict
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 rules.
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,
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art
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classes
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 provide them the opportunity to get rid of the burden of academic
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.
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, taking
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-related
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 is beneficial for high
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students
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' brain development in the way it boosts their creativity and observation capability.
Art
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subjects
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 not only provide learners new perspectives about the world around them
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 but
also
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 allow
students
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 to express their inner world in a variety of different ways.
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, high
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students
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 should have
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 right to choose
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-related options
instead
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 of taking these
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 as compulsory.
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 with, if pupils are forced to study the
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 that they are not interested in, they would drop out( skip) of the course
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 boredom and stress.My cousin,
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, is always dropping out of the
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 course because he is not passionate about it.
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these
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,
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 as technology or science lead to more employment opportunities for
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 in the future than
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such
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 as drawing or painting. In Vietnam,
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, a candidate with a degree in information technology would find it easier to get a job than a drawing major. In conclusion,
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 some people believe that
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subjects
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such
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 as drawing and painting should be made compulsory(mandatory ), I personally believe that
students
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 should have a right to choose
art
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courses
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 in an optimal way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • emotional intelligence
  • express themselves
  • compulsory
  • hidden talents
  • detract
  • core subjects
  • inclination
  • stressful
  • unproductive
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • universal appeal
  • cultural education
  • diverse backgrounds
  • standardized testing
  • academic performance
  • quality
  • creativity
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