Countries should not waste money exploring space. Instead, we should spend money and resources protecting our planet and solving the problems that we have on earth

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of all, exploring space is wasting of money and resources. We don't know whether

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we can find something

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, there are a lot of poor people

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and goods in their daily life. Poverty

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in everywhere in the

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of wasting humans on space projects, those experts should address

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problem. They should study how rich countries

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their population, economics, taxes and public facilities. When they know these things, experts may plan a perfect country's structure to

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problem. Another reason is that people these days do not use

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. Once scientists find a new planet, they would have to find another new one because we run out of resources again.

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, money should spend on education projects, movement campaigns and public policies.

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statement that countries should spend their finances and

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to solve our problems and protect the

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these on exploring other planets since we have a number of problems nowadays and people

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