Countries should not waste money exploring space. Instead, we should spend money and resources protecting our planet and solving the problems that we have on earth

Solving the
world
's problems and protecting our planet should be done
first
rather than spending finances and resource on
space
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issue
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. I strongly agree with
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opinion and will discuss
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this
essay.
First
of all, exploring space is wasting of money and resources. We don't know whether
if
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we can find something
on
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other spaces.
However
, in
this
world
, we know many
prolems
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problems
.
For example
, there are a lot of poor people
scarcing
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scarce
scaring
foods
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and goods in their daily life. Poverty
are
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in everywhere in the
world
.
Instead
of wasting humans on space projects, those experts should address
this
problem. They should study how rich countries
manages
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their population, economics, taxes and public facilities. When they know these things, experts may plan a perfect country's structure to
takle
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tackle
take
this
problem. Another reason is that people these days do not use
resoruces
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resources
worthy. They spend money on what they want without caring
of
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the
world
. Once scientists find a new planet, they would have to find another new one because we run out of resources again.
Therefore
, money should spend on education projects, movement campaigns and public policies.
For instance
, every
shool
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should have
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lesson
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lessons
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for
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evironment
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environment
environmental
issues. The
next
example is the government should have movement campaigns for plastics zero or slow fashions. In conclusion,
this
essay completely agrees with
this
statement that countries should spend their finances and
resoruces
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resources
to solve our problems and protect the
world
rather
wasting
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these on exploring other planets since we have a number of problems nowadays and people
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resouces
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resources
unworthy.
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