Countries should not waste money exploring space. Instead, we should spend money and resources protecting our planet and solving the problems that we have on earth
Solving the
world
's problems and protecting our planet should be done first
rather than spending finances and resource on space
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of all, exploring space is wasting of money and resources. We don't know whether if
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However
, in this
world
, we know many prolems
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problems
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, there are a lot of poor people scarcing
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. Instead
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Another reason is that people these days do not use resoruces
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about
world
. Once scientists find a new planet, they would have to find another new one because we run out of resources again. Therefore
, money should spend on education projects, movement campaigns and public policies. For instance
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lessons
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In conclusion, this
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statement that countries should spend their finances and resoruces
to solve our problems and protect the Correct your spelling
resources
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rather wasting
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