Eating too much sugar is harmful to health. Some people think it is the government’s responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the obesity rate in South Korea has been increasing according to many statistics. The media started talking about what the

government

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's role is to lower

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's

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consumption. Some activists even spoke in public that the national authorities should legislate against the increasing amount of

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intake in order to handle the situation. There are

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who are against the

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's intervention, saying that it's a misusing the power of the

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. They assert that what kind of foods they will eat should be chosen by themselves.

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, it's said by many communities that the individual's responsibility is limited so the

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needs to take an action to

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the system of

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. With the increasing number of fast food chains and the lifestyle of recent decades, it has been unavoidable for the public to have a distance from excessive amounts of

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.

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, it's necessary to

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society

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through the

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of speaking to an individual to take responsibility.

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, some

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insisted that the

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on

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is inevitable to improve the current situation. It is important for citizens to have the right to choose what they want. Meanwhile, it's

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the

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's role to handle undesirable situations.

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, the

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must choose an indirect way to guide

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to good diets.

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, they can charge a

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so

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would choose healthier meals

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of sugary ones. By doing so,

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will unconsciously decrease

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consumption. There can be an argument that

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is for poor

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.

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, the

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can reinvest the

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income to lower the

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rate for healthier meals. In conclusion, the

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should take action to

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society

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,

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of letting

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choose what they want to eat, not considering the

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in

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.