Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical=serious in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

pollution
is a serious problem, and finding a solution will not be simple. It involves a lot of different countries and many political and economic factors.
However
, we can each make a contribution to the solution. It involves being more responsible about our
use
of
products
that
harm
our environment. In my opinion that there are several causes of
pollution
and several ways to prevent
pollution
.and I will discuss them in
this
essay.
firstly
,
paper
products
cause huge
harm
to our earth. they contaminate the air and
harm
the trees. these
products
we
use
paper
in our daily lives and we would not want to give them up.
However
, we can reuse
paper
products
in different ways in our lives.
for example
, we can
use
bags for shopping many times. ,
Also
we can
use
writing
paper
in our studies and erase the writing as much as we can.
This
example is simple and everyone can do it .
secondly
, gasoline cars
also
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an important factor that causes
pollution
in the air.We can not stop using cars in our life .the cares help people go working , and shopping but, it makes them sick and
suffer
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by polluting our environment. Having a solution for
this
dilemma we can do many things to help. electronic-cars have little
harm
and can save our health.,
Also
we can
use
general transportation
such
as buses and trains that would diffidently help . To sum up, we can each save our planet by doing small activities that really make difference. When we are more responsible sure we will win and
pollution
will lose.
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