Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information beacuse they have more influence than other forms of media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in recent times, the communities need to update the

information

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to know what happens now. I completely agree to read

news

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from newspapers to get the

information

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accurately. oppositely, other

population

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disagree with

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statement because they can get

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faster on their gadgets. on the one hand, some

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agree that the newspaper is

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accurate source for getting the

news

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. these media serve a lot of topics from many

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as politics, entertainment, hobby, talent, and others. the press is the favourite

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nation

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until

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time.

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, every single day in the morning, some public in Indonesia always read the

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from the courier. they have got

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publishing because they pay it for some fee, they were joining as a member of

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news

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company. not only message by joining

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membership they

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get the best offering in their town.

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, there are some population who argue that they did not read the

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from the press because it was bored activity.

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, they are searching other resources to get some

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such

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as blogs on their handphone.

moreover

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this

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community will get the statement faster and for free.

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, if there is any dangerous situation or an accident in someplace, certainly there is one person or more

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record

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situation and

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it on social media. in that case,

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data would spread fastly. but, there

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some negative factors on the internet, in

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message on the internet

less

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accurate and hoaxed. in a nutshell, the newspaper is the best media for getting

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accurately.

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, to get the

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the public must pay some fee, which

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the same as getting

report

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a report

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from the internet

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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