Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information beacuse they have more influence than other forms of media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in recent times, the communities need to update the
information
to know what happens now. I completely agree to read
news
from newspapers to get the
information
accurately. oppositely, other
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disagree with
this
statement because they can get
information
faster on their gadgets. on the one hand, some
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agree that the newspaper is
the
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accurate source for getting the
news
. these media serve a lot of topics from many
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,
such
as politics, entertainment, hobby, talent, and others. the press is the favourite
publishing
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for
older
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nation
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until
this
time.
for example
, every single day in the morning, some public in Indonesia always read the
news
from the courier. they have got
this
publishing because they pay it for some fee, they were joining as a member of
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news
company. not only message by joining
this
membership they
also
get the best offering in their town.
on the other hand
, there are some population who argue that they did not read the
news
from the press because it was bored activity.
as a result
, they are searching other resources to get some
information
such
as blogs on their handphone.
moreover
,
this
community will get the statement faster and for free.
for instance
, if there is any dangerous situation or an accident in someplace, certainly there is one person or more
than
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record
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this
situation and
sharing
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it on social media. in that case,
this
data would spread fastly. but, there
is
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some negative factors on the internet, in
general
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message on the internet
less
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accurate and hoaxed. in a nutshell, the newspaper is the best media for getting
information
accurately.
in addition
, to get the
information
the public must pay some fee, which
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the same as getting
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from the internet
that is
free.
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