Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information beacuse they have more influence than other forms of media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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in recent times, the communities need to update the

information

to know what happens now. I completely agree to read

news

from newspapers to get the

information

accurately. oppositely, other

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disagree with

this

statement because they can get

information

faster on their gadgets. on the one hand, some

society

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agree that the newspaper is

the

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accurate source for getting the

news

. these media serve a lot of topics from many

sector

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such

as politics, entertainment, hobby, talent, and others. the press is the favourite

publishing

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for

older

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nation

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until

this

time.

for example

, every single day in the morning, some public in Indonesia always read the

news

from the courier. they have got

this

publishing because they pay it for some fee, they were joining as a member of

local

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news

company. not only message by joining

this

membership they

also

get the best offering in their town.

on the other hand

, there are some population who argue that they did not read the

news

from the press because it was bored activity.

as a result

, they are searching other resources to get some

information

such

as blogs on their handphone.

moreover

this

community will get the statement faster and for free.

for instance

, if there is any dangerous situation or an accident in someplace, certainly there is one person or more

than

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record

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this

situation and

sharing

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it on social media. in that case,

this

data would spread fastly. but, there

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some negative factors on the internet, in

general

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message on the internet

less

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accurate and hoaxed. in a nutshell, the newspaper is the best media for getting

information

accurately.

in addition

, to get the

information

the public must pay some fee, which

not

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the same as getting

report

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a report

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from the internet

that is

free.

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