It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Is it really important to take
risks
? Taking risks
is like a gamble, you could either win or lose. Is it really all right to put all your hard work in danger, just for a bit more profit? I personally think taking a risk
, both personally and professionally is very important.
People work hard and harder just to profit more but when it comes to taking a risk
, where we can achieve a huge profit, we surrender and that’s because we don’t want to lose the goals we worked hard for. But what people don’t realise is that taking a risk
might be the sole reason to help us reach our goals. Let’s take an entrepreneur as an example, their whole career is about risks
and starting a product/business from scratch. Of course many fail but what about the hundreds who succeed? They all succeed only because they took a risk
and many of them even made millions. I can’t think of one famous important person who didn’t take a risk
, a chance of failing, while they were trying to imagine and create magnificent wonders. Is holding back really going to get us anywhere? I don’t think so. Failure can be very devastating and might even demotivate us but I like to think that taking a risk
and having a chance at making an incredible decision is worth failure. Plus the world wouldn’t run without risks
. Risk
-taking is not only important in your professional life
but also
in your personal life
. It could be either confessing to the love of your life
or finally
standing up to your boss to spend some quality time with your family, these things seem scary because of the risk
of failure but imagine what if it all goes right? It could turn into a beautiful moment and then
you will recognise it all, how worth it all of these risks
were .
I believe that the advantages of taking risks
definitely outweigh the disadvantage. Life
is all about taking risks
. So it's finally
time to step up and make the right decision because these decisions will make or break your life
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite