These days, more and more people prefer to use shared transport such as buses, trams or carsharing applications on their smartphones rather than driving their own cars. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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transportation

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cheapest price so it is affordable for all groups.

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advantages than

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advantages

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. the benefits are, reducing the carbon in the atmosphere and reducing the cost

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daily.