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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The maps illustrate an industrial
area
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 in a city named Norbiton at present and its future plan. Overall the main change will be the construction of the housing complex.
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, other facilities will
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 be built
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 as shops, a medical
center
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, a playground, and a school. Other than that, there will be a new
road
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 and bridge to the farmland across the river. Currently, it is an
area
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 designated for factories only. It is located near the town border. There are two main roads, one on the outside of the complex, and the other on the inside. The roundabout is located on the inner main
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. The
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 is surrounded by eight buildings all the way from the east to the west side of the inner main
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. On the north side of the
area
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, there is a river that separates the manufactory zone and farmland. In the future, the factories will be demolished and replaced with
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residential
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area
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.
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, there will be a new small roundabout in the outer main
road
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 connected to the inner main
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.
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, the exit of the big roundabout will be expanded into four, the new one will be on the north and northwest. The shops will be built on the southwest of the big roundabout, while the medical
center
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 will
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 be built across from that. In the east
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, more accommodation blocks, a playground, and a school will be constructed.
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, the
road
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 to the farmland will
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 be built, with a bridge to cross the river.
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