The health benefits of physical exercise are well-known. Despite this, a lot of people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise more often

Exercising is an important task to be done daily because of the great impact on the person's health and strength. A lot of

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are avoiding working out on a daily base. In

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I will give the reasons and I will discuss the solutions.

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of all, we all know exercising is not easy, lifting

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and running for a long time is something

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large self-motivation, the

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thing is it might be quite expensive to register in a gym or to buy a treadmill. On top of that to gain clear results you have to eat healthily which can cost you a lot of time and money.

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, some

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tend to live lazy life as it

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money and they will be able to eat and do what they want without taking care of the food type or thinking about the best time to go to the gym every day. There

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some solutions for

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, you need to have self-motivation to do the workout because it is expensive and not easy to be done you will feel tired and thirsty but for sure the result will be satisfying good health and nice shape.

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, the rate of obesity is increasing dramatically according to multiple food choices especially fast food which

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a large

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of fats and added sugar.

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at home and not doing any type of movement and training,

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problem is responsible for causing lethal diseases

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as diabetes, sleep apnea and myocardial infarction. To solve

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problem

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need to understand how much

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to be lazy and not to make yourself tired every day by exercising and working out, the government

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need to support those who can not buy gym products by providing the equipment in the local areas like in the gardens and in the walkways.

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, you have muscles in your body to use it,

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build it, and

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feed it

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healthy sources. To conclude, exercising and leaving a healthy lifestyle

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necessary to protect

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people

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from diseases and to have

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and strong community. We have to stand altogether and support each other,

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those who are not familiar with the impacts of not training.