Some children spen hours every day on thier smartphones. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is often argued that there are some
children
who are spending their time
on their smartphones every day. In my opinion,the growth of smartphone usage time
for children
has more harmful effects than its benefits.
First
of all, children
who spend their whole time
on their smartphones are likely to lack of
social bonding in real life. If they are stuck to their Remove the preposition
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phones
for a long time
, they are unlikely to meet and hang out with their friends
at playgrounds or in central parks. Also
, they would feel more comfortable and pleasure when they are with their friends
on the internet rather than friends
in real life. If these bad situations are continued, they will be likely to lose bonding with their family and friends
. For example
, many kids who appeared on TV shows because of their social ability issues had common in being addicted to their phones
and not being willing to meet their friends
from their schools. That's why I believe that children
's being stuck to their phones
has more disadvantages.
Second
, children
who are addicted to their phones
have a
little ability Correct article usage
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of
creativity and Change preposition
to
studying
. When they are on Replace the word
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phones
, they are unlikely to think and have ideas of something since they just watch videos that are made by other people or play games which can be pretty violate
for immature kids. Change the verb form
be pretty violated
As a result
, their brains stop thinking deeply and become hardened. It leads to big damage when it comes to their grades in their school. For instance
, there are several studies that students who are used to spen
their every Correct your spelling
spend
time
on their phones
have gotten more fails
than students who aren't. Replace the word
failings
Thus
it can't be denied that spending much time
on their devices brings unfavourable situations.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the increasing number of children
who are addicted to their phones
is a very risky trend because they are more and more lacking social bonding in their life, and they are becoming reverse people of geniuses.Submitted by ksl4308 on
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