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Some children spen hours every day on thier smartphones. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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It is often argued that there are some
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 who are spending their
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 on their smartphones every day. In my opinion,the growth of smartphone usage
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 for
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 has more harmful effects than its benefits. 
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 of all,
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 who spend their whole
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 on their smartphones are likely to lack
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social bonding in real life. If they are stuck to their
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 for a long
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, they are unlikely to meet and hang out with their
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 at playgrounds or in central parks.
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, they would feel more comfortable and pleasure when they are with their
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 on the internet rather than
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 in real life. If these bad situations are continued, they will be likely to lose bonding with their family and
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.
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, many kids who appeared on TV shows because of their social ability issues had common in being addicted to their
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 and not being willing to meet their
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 from their schools. That's why I believe that
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's being stuck to their
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 has more disadvantages. 
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,
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 who are addicted to their
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little ability
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 creativity and
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. When they are on
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, they are unlikely to think and have ideas of something since they just watch videos that are made by other people or play games which can
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 for immature kids.
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, their brains stop thinking deeply and become hardened. It leads to big damage when it comes to their grades in their school.
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, there are several studies that students who are used to
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 on their
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 have gotten more
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 than students who aren't.
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 it can't be denied that spending much
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 on their devices brings unfavourable situations.  In conclusion, I strongly believe that the increasing number of
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 who are addicted to their
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 is a very risky trend because they are more and more lacking social bonding in their life, and they are becoming reverse people of geniuses.

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