Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

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formal examinations are the best
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their studies. But they
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that continual
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assessment
such
as coursework and
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homework
is not a perfect
way
to replace it. In my opinion, continual assessment
such
as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory
way
to evaluate
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students
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. Teachers and parents around us
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formal examinations like
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mid-term exam and final exam
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only
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way
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ability to
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life work. But some
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that it is not
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way
to assess a
student
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For example
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old teacher agree with
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examination are the only
way
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student
's
ablity
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ability
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they hold
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exam to evaluate their children and young teacher believes that it is not
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way
to evaluate them. But there is an advanced
way
to assess a
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performance
these days. In Korea, there is a course named "evaluating each
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". Each
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in a classroom can evaluate each
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. They can classify each other with a predicted score, A, B, C and D. After scoring classmates,
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about reason is necessary. Teachers will make a final decision to
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students after "evaluating each
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"
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finished. In conclusion, classifying a
student
's ability with formal examinations is not a perfect
way
to assess a
student
's performance, and continual
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such
as coursework, projects and homework cannot replace it. The best
way
to assess each
student
's
performace
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performance
is using the "evaluating each
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". Each
classmates
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can motivate themselves by evaluating each
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.
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