Some parents bring thier children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

These days parents spend a

lot

of money to buy everything for

thier

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their

children

including

toys

. As well as it has more impact

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children

's lifestyles.

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essay will sufficiently discuss the

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and cons of pampering

one

's child with plenty

toys

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of toys

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. On the

one

hand, playing with

toys

is the best way to improve the skills of

children

during adolescence. In

this

technology area, the

toys

become so smart that they can help the

children

to develop strong analytical and logical skills.

For example

,

toys

like block building,

puzzle

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solving

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help

strengthening

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the mental thinking of the

children

.

In addition

to

this

, nowadays there are more families which have only

one

child, a baby can make relationships with the

toys

like his siblings and friends to feel less lonely. If there are associated with dolls, they will have an outgoing personality character.

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the other hand,

one

of the drawbacks is that if they spend a

lot

of time with dolls, they will become inactive and gain weight.

Moreover

, parents spend more time on

toys

to entertain

thier

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their

offspring

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family budget.

Furthermore

,

this

would reduce the ability the interact with other people.

Consequently

, the child would enjoy staying alone or playing with themselves. Statistics

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demonstrate that

children

who play alone are more likely to not adjust

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society. In conclusion, a

lot

of parents are buying

thier

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their

offspring a massive amount of dolls.

However

, it can make an upward trend in

cheerfulness

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of our son and daughter.

Although

, it is not required to spend a

lot

of give them great infancy.

In other words

, it can be provided in different ways.