You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ............,

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Dear Mark, I want to tell you about a new place where I have recently moved in. As you know, I have found a new job in the city. The commute time from my previous place to the office was about one hour,
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I decided to look for something closer to the office.  After a few viewings, I found
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apartment. It is a perfect fit for me. It's situated on the ground floor. I have a living room, combined with the kitchen, and two bedrooms. I plan to use one of them as my home office.
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have a place to store my bike. Overall, I'm very happy with
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choice. I plan to organise a housewarming party sometime
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month. Please let me know when you are available. And
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I'll choose the date and time. I'll be very happy to see you there! Best regards, V
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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