Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours each day. Write a letter to Mrs, Barret. In your letter suggest how you could help her say why you would like to do this work explain when you would will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing in regard to your advertisement which was published on January 12th, requesting help for a few hours each day. I would be available to assist you

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summer. I wanted to tell you about the ways I can help you if you choose me. As an excellent cook, I would be able to cook your meals so you would not have to spend time on

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chore. I can

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help with other house activities,

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as washing up or tidying up your house. I used to take care of my grandmother when I still lived in my hometown, and doing

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work would bring back many enjoyable memories of the times I lived with her and helped her around the house.

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I am a university student, I would be available every weekday as I don't have summer classes. Unfortunately, I will not be available during the weekends since it is the only time I have to visit my friends. If you have any other questions or need me to clarify anything, please do not hesitate to send me an e-mail. Best Regards, Dorsa Alami

TUTOO

Jan 14, 2023

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