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On a recent holiday you lost avaluable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. I am
member
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oy
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of
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yours
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your
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 insurance company.
Last
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 week I came
my
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home from holiday.
This
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 holiday became so good . But I have one problem. On
this
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 holiday I lost my
avaluable
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valuable
 thing
that
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my gold watch . It was made
soft
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of soft
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 gold and
cost
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the cost
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 was expensive. And I lost it in the hotel room which was the bedroom they gave me.
On
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this
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 day
morning
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,morning
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 I went
to run
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running
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 outside.
This
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 is
reason
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the reason
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, I put it on the table. But after I came room my watch
not
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did not
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 stand on
table
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a table
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. I became so upset
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this
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about this
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 phenomenon. Suddenly I remember that I have travel insurance.
That is
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 why
,
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 now I am writing to request that please help me for finding my watch . I believe that you can find it because
this
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 thing is your work . Please find it and send
to
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it to
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 me as soon as possible. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully ...... Khamrayeva Munisa
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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