Some people say that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on TV in order to control violent crimes in society. How far do you agree or disagree with the statement?

These days the majority of
people
suggest that the
government
must supervise the vast amount of
violence
in movies and on TV legislation to
control
violator offences in
society
. In
this
paper. I will argue that it is the responsibility of the
government
to
control
more
violence
in
films
and movies . The reasons are twofold .
First
of all, supervising
much
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violence
in
films
and on TV
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is so useful for young
people
's behaviour and their future
life
. Because they always watch
this
kind of film. After
this
phenomenon, they want to use violent actions . Actually, they will do crimes.
For instance
, one teenager always watches
about
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violence
. After
tha
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that
the
,t he or she learns
crime
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method .
Then
he or she uses it in real
life
and
change
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his or her future . Because
this
thing negatively
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her or his
life
.
This
is the reason
government
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must
control
it .
Secondly
, it is important to remember that
films
about
violence
can affect
society
's
life
. Because violent
films
change
people
's behaviour and make
people
like egoists. They never think
society's
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life
and always do everything for themselves.
For example
, if each person always does everything for themselves. So
society
never grows and
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. Because in
society
people
always think
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of themselves
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they never can think of
society
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life
. And nobody does anything for
society
. So violent
films
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effective in
society
and
people
's
life
. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the
government
violator crimes in
society
and
also
must
control
the
amount
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of violent
films
.
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