Some people say that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on TV in order to control violent crimes in society. How far do you agree or disagree with the statement?
These days the majority of
people
suggest that the government
must supervise the vast amount of violence
in movies and on TV legislation to control
violator offences in society
. In this
paper. I will argue that it is the responsibility of the government
to control
more violence
in films
and movies . The reasons are twofold .
First
of all, supervising much
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violence
in films
and on TV this things
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people
's behaviour and their future life
. Because they always watch this
kind of film. After this
phenomenon, they want to use violent actions . Actually, they will do crimes. For instance
, one teenager always watches about
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violence
. After tha
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that
the
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he or she uses it in real life
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life
. This
is the reason government
must Add an article
the government
control
it .
Secondly
, it is important to remember that films
about violence
can affect society
's life
. Because violent films
change people
's behaviour and make people
like egoists. They never think society's
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about society's
life
and always do everything for themselves. For example
, if each person always does everything for themselves. So society
never grows and develop
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society
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life
. And nobody does anything for society
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society
and people
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By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the government
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and also
must control
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films
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