In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard for their study. What do you think the causes and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years,
children
gain a lot of pressure from various situations.In some countries, their free time is lessened day by day.Use synonyms
Moreover
, they get a lot of pressure that they must work hard for their studying. Linking Words
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essay will discuss the potential cause of Linking Words
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situation and the solution to prevent Linking Words
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problem.
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of all, the possible cause of the lack of leisure occasion is that the Linking Words
children
receive pressure from their environment Use synonyms
such
as their family.The stress was produced unintentionally by their parent who expects their son or daughter too much. They wish that their child must study harder to receive a reward or even to get an offer from a high-rank university in the future. Linking Words
For example
, my dad and mom were a doctor, they wish that I would be similar to them and encouraged me to study hard Linking Words
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, they don't allow me to have leisure moments to do what I am keen to do.
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,in my opinion, the Linking Words
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effective way out should be accepting their Linking Words
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's choice selection .Use synonyms
Firstly
, the parents must accept that they should give their child the ability to choose their own life. The family should be only the adviser for them but should not draw a border for the Linking Words
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regarding what they have to do or what they have to be in the future. Another potential solution is to compromise with them Use synonyms
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as if they do a good job, they will have more free pace.
In conclusion,according to me, parents are the major cause of Linking Words
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circumstance and the solution is that the family should accept their Linking Words
children
's options selection and Use synonyms
also
must be more compromised with their kids.Linking Words
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