Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle it?

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young generations are getting deeper into watching television, rather than doing

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activities or learning making new interesting things. The main cause of

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issue is they do not have

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daily plan and

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parental responsibility. From my point of

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this

problem can be solved if parents will create

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for their

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and start controlling their time. Nowadays

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of individuals , especially

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do not move with one correct plan and parents do not notice their child’s lifestyle. There is no doubt that

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young people are becoming increasingly dependent on TV, because

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do not know how to spend their time efficiently and enjoy making creative things,

such

as drawing.

This

problem has become too complicated in each country.

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, one of the biggest international news agency BBC Inc. in Britain had a report with some kindergarten teachers about their

children

’s educational progress and Mrs Marley Johansen one of the main educators in “Handy boy” kindergarten said that “

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in our modern life are not interested in learning anything and

also

they won’t

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at all! Of

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not everyone in our kindergarten has these problems, but I think we should make them interested in learning as well “. Perhaps these two main reasons are submitting

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’s interests.

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solutions for

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youngsters effective and consistent daily

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which will help them to improve their performance and they

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need parental guidance.

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, if they control and cram their

children

, in the

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there will be beautiful behaviour and healthy lifestyle in their infant. To conclude, youngsters do not want to learn because of

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lifestyle, but if parents will help them, youngsters will get out

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situation easily.