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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What si your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays,nations are getting attracted towards breach shows in large numbers
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 them popular at a global level.There are many reasons for
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 its behaviour. Watching misconduct series and reading
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 books makes people curious about the climax of the show as they are full of suspense, thrills and action. Some people do not watch individually rather
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plan
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group
movies
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 which in turn
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awakens
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 more people
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 these kinds of films.
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, the human population are getting fascinated by binge-watching them. Today, the cinema industry is evolving drastically
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tastes
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 of the public. If one evil drama earns huge amounts of profit because of remarkable reviews and responses from an audience,
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 other producers follow in the footsteps of
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 shows and direct more movies in the violation category.
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, the young generation is adding massive knowledge to their minds by learning about advanced technology used to solve cases in TV shows and books. To add
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 they get to know about diverse laws in different nations. To cite an example,
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 a recent survey by university students
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, 75
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 per cent of pupils are learning more about rules and regulations in other countries than the older generation.
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, scandal fiction has blown the minds of the young crowd the most. In my opinion,
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 films and novels are actually full of enthusiasm and yield a thrilling experience if they are seen within a certain limit.Sometimes they can create enormous negative thoughts and overthink if watched regularly.
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, there is no doubt that these shows are gaining attention
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 acknowledging criminals about new innovations.

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coherence
Improve flow by linking ideas clearly. Start each paragraph with a topic idea that connects to the task.
task response
State your view early and restate it in the end. Make a clear stance.
language use
Keep short, simple sentences. Use common words and check grammar.
content
Give one clear example for each point and explain how it links to the idea.
structure
Uses a clear structure with an introduction and a conclusion.
content
Gives reasons for why crime shows attract people.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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