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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effects on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #health #sports #facilities #effects #measures
For decades, human beings have been utilizing
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opportunities for doing physical
activies
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activities
activity
 for
well being
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.
Nevertheless
, some parts of
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society
 claim that these
kind
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 of
attitutes
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attitudes
 are not enough for
achievement
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the achievement
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 of establishing
a
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healty
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healthy
 individuals. In fact, while education is an essential point,
also
, sportive
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attitudes
attitude
has
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a
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 enormous role in
the
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society
.
Initially
, there is
directly
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colaboration
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collaboration
 between sports and
achive
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achieve
 a
healty
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healthy
 body for humanity. The idea of mentally being strong requires physical acts.
Physologically
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Physiologically
Psychologically
,
sport
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the sport
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 has a huge impact on
human
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the human
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brain
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healty
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healthy
health
.
On the other hand
, considering the lack of labour power in the hospitals,
well being
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well-being
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 and keeping our
body
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bodies
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 in a good way is essential for
society
.
For instance
, human beings have been struggling with
covid-19
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the covid-19
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 disease for almost 3 years and humanity
encounter
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encounters
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 the reality of
the
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problems in
healty
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healthy
health
 systems all around the world. All in all, these are just
few
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 of the reasons out of dozens
to
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for
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 supporting
of
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the idea of
sport
. While
supporting
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 points above are considerable, there is
an other
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another
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 aspect of
this
 issue that we should discuss. Education might play a significant role
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 domestic well-being,
additionally
. It is seen that increasing awareness about
self development
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self-development
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on
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the
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society
 can improve the matter. When residents know how important is
being
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healty
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healthy
 and some concrete results in their life might be
usefull
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useful
 for
the
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developing their vision. At
this
 point,
poeple
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people
 can create some habits for themselves without any force.
However
,
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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on
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of
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 the
nutricious
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nutritious
 are
also
crucially
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crucial
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. The huge
percantage
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percentage
 of heal comes from an accurate diet program
that is
 obeyed by individuals.
One
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 a final note, the foods
what
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 we eat and being aware of our
self development
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self-development
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 are as much important as
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a sport
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sport
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sports
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. To sum up, there is a wide range of
contreversy
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controversy
, but the supporting elements
such
 as how important
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sports,
self development
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self-development
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, and diets demonstrate that there is a balance between doing
sport
 and other facilities for
succesfully
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successfully
successful
 structure a
healty
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healthy
society
.
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