In today's world, the spread of computer use has changed our way of living so that people can buy many things through the Internet. Discuss some advantages and disadvantages of Internet shopping.

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It is irrefutable that online shopping has changed our life in a good way;
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, it has some negative effects on
people
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's lives, too. In
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essay, I will write about
pros
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the pros
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and cons of
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trend. Shopping from
Internet
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has a number of advantages which make our lives easier.
To begin
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with, we can gain a lot of time when we do shopping
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our mobile phones or computers.
For instance
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, as long as we want to buy clothes or food, we need to go outside and walk to a
shop
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or restaurant.
Nonetheless
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, if we buy it online, it will only take seconds.
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, we will gain
great
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amount of time.
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, we can see more discounts on the
internet
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since we are able to look at various websites as well as compare their prices. To illustrate, once
people
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see a discount in a
shop
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, they instantly want to buy it because humans think it is the lowest price of the clothes and they cannot know what is the cost of dresses in other markets. Thereby, it is a really amazing way of saving more
money
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. There
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also
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are also
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some disadvantages of
Internet
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shopping.
First
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of all, the number of scammers on
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internet
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has increased enormously since plenty of
people
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start to buy their goods online. Those cheaters make fake websites and give ads about their sales which attract a lot of
people
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. Humans who see the low prices of big brands want to buy something from
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this
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guys because they are afraid of missing these discounts. Even in the modern world, developers are not able to solve
this
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problem completely.
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, some
people
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are not sure about their body size and it can lead
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to misunderstanding
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misunderstanding
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misunderstandings
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between
customer
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customers
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and
shop
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owners. They can get
wrong
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the wrong
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size from a
shop
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which they cannot refund. At that moment, there is nothing to do since
shop
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owners
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had already
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already shown
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that the community cannot give back their products.
As a result
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, you can waste a great amount of
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. To put it in a
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nutshell
, I pen down saying that even though there are some pros of online shopping like saving time as well as
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, it has
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a number of cons
such
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as
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scams
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as well as
waste
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a waste
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of
money
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • E-commerce
  • Consumer behavior
  • Retail therapy
  • Cybersecurity
  • Logistics
  • Omni-channel shopping experience
  • Digital wallet
  • User interface
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Product reviews
  • Return policy
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Social commerce
  • Virtual fitting room
  • Marketplace
  • Shopping cart abandonment
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