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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age 5 or 6, right up until age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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examinations
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 serious advantages plus disadvantages as discussed in the below sections. It is vital to test the
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knowledge in some form of measurement and based on certain set KPIs, Evaluating children's level of understanding
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 will provide a good idea for the teachers on how
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