Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree
Nowadays
its
really easy you can purchase anything all around the Correct your spelling
it's
world
with the help to
technology and Change preposition
of
internet
. While some Correct article usage
the internet
people
claim that we should prefer the domestic market instead
of overseas. Whereas this
essay is advocating the former point of view in the following paragraph.
On the one hand ,so many dwellers believe that national
community should buy Correct article usage
the national
the
all Remove the article
apply
products
from their nation because they are cheap and affordable instead
of international products
. For example
, dragon fruit
is international fruit
which is not cultivated in Canada and price
of that Correct article usage
the price
fruit
high
Add a missing verb
is high
as
compared with Change preposition
apply
another
market Correct quantifier usage
other
fruit
. Another reason is they think the value of domestic items will be declined by overseas products
people
gives
more preference to Change the verb form
give
the
outsider Correct article usage
apply
products
for instance
clothes people
like to buy different brands from different countries
to show their status in society.
On the
Remove the article
apply
another
hand ,while some Correct quantifier usage
other
nation
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
are
not in Change the verb form
is
favor
of import ,essay Change the spelling
favour
believe
Change the verb form
believes
its
a good way to maintain healthy relationships between the Replace the word
it's
it is
countries
by import
and Wrong verb form
importing
export
their local stuff on the international level.Wrong verb form
exporting
such
as Quatro is one of the country
who is export their fuel all around the Change to a plural noun
countries
world
to run the automobile vehicles those working on fossil fule
.Correct your spelling
fuel
Secondly
like this
we can maintain balance all around the Add a comma
,this
world
because we have so many countries
around the world
those
are not agriculture friendly Correct pronoun usage
that
such
as canada
which is not producing all eating item's inside the country due to weather conditions Change the capitalization
Canada
large
amount of stuff is imported inside Change the article
a large
the
Canada from all around the Correct article usage
apply
world
.Last
but not least economic development sending the local products
on
Change preposition
apply
the
good wages outside the Correct article usage
apply
countries
help
to support their economic status as Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
such
india
is imported food stuff dramatically to Change the capitalization
India
the
other Correct article usage
apply
countries
which help
to build the economy of the country.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
this
essay highlights that some people
thinking
it has Wrong verb form
think
negative
impact, while most of Add an article
a negative
population
believes Add an article
the population
this
is a really useful method for particular countries
to maintain their social and economic status around the world
.Submitted by Jagmeetkaur575 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!