Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree

Nowadays
its
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it's
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really easy you can purchase anything all around the
world
with the help
to
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technology and
internet
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. While some
people
claim that we should prefer the domestic market
instead
of overseas. Whereas
this
essay is advocating the former point of view in the following paragraph. On the one hand ,so many dwellers believe that
national
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the national
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community should buy
the
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all
products
from their nation because they are cheap and affordable
instead
of international
products
.
For example
, dragon
fruit
is international
fruit
which is not cultivated in Canada and
price
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the price
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of that
fruit
high
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as
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compared with
another
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other
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market
fruit
. Another reason is they think the value of domestic items will be declined by overseas
products
people
gives
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more preference to
the
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outsider
products
for instance
clothes
people
like to buy different brands from different
countries
to show their status in society. On
the
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another
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other
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hand ,while some
nation
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are
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not in
favor
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of import ,essay
believe
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its
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it's
it is
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a good way to maintain healthy relationships between the
countries
by
import
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importing
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and
export
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exporting
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their local stuff on the international level.
such
as Quatro is one of the
country
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countries
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who is export their fuel all around the
world
to run the automobile vehicles those working on fossil
fule
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fuel
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.
Secondly
like
this
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we can maintain balance all around the
world
because we have so many
countries
around the
world
those
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that
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are not agriculture friendly
such
as
canada
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Canada
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which is not producing all eating item's inside the country due to weather conditions
large
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a large
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amount of stuff is imported inside
the
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Canada from all around the
world
.
Last
but not least economic development sending the local
products
on
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the
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apply
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good wages outside the
countries
help
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helps
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to support their economic status as
such
india
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India
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is imported food stuff dramatically to
the
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other
countries
which
help
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helps
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to build the economy of the country. In conclusion,
this
essay highlights that some
people
thinking
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think
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it has
negative
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a negative
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impact, while most of
population
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the population
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believes
this
is a really useful method for particular
countries
to maintain their social and economic status around the
world
.
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