A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the musuem • Describe some skill and qualities you have the would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for the position of
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in the central museum. I am a student at Isipathana College and lived in Colombo 06. I am Seeking voluntary
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because it could increase my social skill.
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, I would like to make new friends in
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town and believe
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Job would help me to increase my social network.
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,
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job would help me to develop my self-confidence and due to that fact, I believed I can study well in school.
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, I have a passion for
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excellent customer service and have a positive manner.
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, I had experience Volunteering and
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knowledge could help me to do
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more conveniently.
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, during the weekdays after my
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in your organization.
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, during the weekend
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day
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I am available to
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. Thanks for your time. I looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam.
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