Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in the city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

It is often argued that cars are the better mode of travel because it provides multifarious benefits to human while travelling,

however

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few ponder that the

bicycle

is the most effective way of travelling owing to its indigenous benefits to human health.

This

essay will discuss both given notions as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of former notion. To commence with the initial view, how much it would be effective to commute by

car

from one area to another area

.

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while moving it provides a luxurious way of

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as well as it helps

people

to escape from very bad climate. To explain it, a perfect cushioned leather seat delivers a great exposure of relaxation to the human

body

and

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maintain the perfect temperature inside it with the help of an air conditioner may provide the best comfort while commuting.

Furthermore

, It is the best

alternative

to commuting from one zone to another zone in a very bad climate, it helps them to escape from harsh climate conditions

such

as in raining season.

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, a survey

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conducted by Transportation Department revealed that 9

people

out of 10 used cars for their personal comfort in poor weather conditions.

As a result

, commuting by

car

is the best

alternative

to

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because it gives security in bad weather and helps individuals to reach faraway places as soon as possible. Shifting toward the final notion that

people

should use bicycles

instead

of automobiles owing to some healthier reasons. The predominant reason is commuting by

bicycle

, which may be very profitable for human health. To explain it, using a

bicycle

is a kind of exercise that may assist

people

to keep active and healthy and can help to enhance the strength of the

body

that energy can help to

body

to cope with the toxicity

that is

in the

body

and keep the human

body

away from vulnerable diseases. To cite an example, research done by WHO (World Health Organisation) in 2018 indicated that most of the

people

who are used bicycles

instead

of

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car

were more active and disease free.

Hence

, the

bicycle

is a better

alternative

to using the gym and being active in daily life. In conclusion,

although

travelling with the help of a

car

is a luxurious method of travel while a

bicycle

is the better

alternative

to remaining fit yet I believe that commuting by

car

has manifold merits rather than using a

bicycle

.