Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in the city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

It is often argued that cars are the better mode of travel because it provides multifarious benefits to human while travelling,

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few ponder that the

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is the most effective way of travelling owing to its indigenous benefits to human health.

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essay will discuss both given notions as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of former notion. To commence with the initial view, how much it would be effective to commute by

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from one area to another area

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while moving it provides a luxurious way of

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as well as it helps

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to escape from very bad climate. To explain it, a perfect cushioned leather seat delivers a great exposure of relaxation to the human

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maintain the perfect temperature inside it with the help of an air conditioner may provide the best comfort while commuting.

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to commuting from one zone to another zone in a very bad climate, it helps them to escape from harsh climate conditions

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as in raining season.

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conducted by Transportation Department revealed that 9

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out of 10 used cars for their personal comfort in poor weather conditions.

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, commuting by

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is the best

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because it gives security in bad weather and helps individuals to reach faraway places as soon as possible. Shifting toward the final notion that

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should use bicycles

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of automobiles owing to some healthier reasons. The predominant reason is commuting by

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, which may be very profitable for human health. To explain it, using a

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is a kind of exercise that may assist

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to keep active and healthy and can help to enhance the strength of the

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that energy can help to

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to cope with the toxicity

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in the

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and keep the human

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away from vulnerable diseases. To cite an example, research done by WHO (World Health Organisation) in 2018 indicated that most of the

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who are used bicycles

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were more active and disease free.

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is a better

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to using the gym and being active in daily life. In conclusion,

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travelling with the help of a

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is a luxurious method of travel while a

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is the better

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to remaining fit yet I believe that commuting by

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has manifold merits rather than using a

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