More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly home cooked food. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
More citizens are deciding
for
Change preposition
on
readymade
Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
instead
of healthy Linking Words
Use synonyms
home prepared
dishes. The main benefits of Add a hyphen
home-prepared
this
are that Linking Words
home
-cooked Use synonyms
food
is healthier and less expensive. Use synonyms
However
, the main drawbacks are addictive and lead to chronic diseases.
One of the main benefits of eating Linking Words
home
-cooked Use synonyms
meals
is that the Use synonyms
food
is so tasty and fresh because Use synonyms
Use synonyms
food
Add an article
the food
are
cookedChange the verb form
is
everyday
and more importantly Replace the word
every day
this
Linking Words
food
is prepared to people's taste. Use synonyms
Firstly
, cooking at Linking Words
home
lead to Use synonyms
enjoy
more and Wrong verb form
enjoying
save
the Wrong verb form
saving
left overs
for the Correct your spelling
leftovers
next
morning. Linking Words
This
allows people to save time and Linking Words
money
because there is always plenty of Use synonyms
food
for the day after tomorrow. Another advantage is that Use synonyms
this
type of meal is less expensive because vegetables and the ingredients are affordable in any supermarket. More importantly, cooking at Linking Words
home
lead individuals to Use synonyms
save
Change the verb form
saving
money
by not buying expensive beverages at Use synonyms
the
restaurants. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
. In California, in order to save Linking Words
money
, most of the immigrants cook at Use synonyms
home
, Use synonyms
so
Correct word choice
apply
Linking Words
this
Correct pronoun usage
which
let
them Change the verb form
lets
to
have more Change the verb form
apply
meals
for the entire family and save Use synonyms
money
.
Use synonyms
However
, when it comes to ready Linking Words
meals
most of the Use synonyms
food
is salty and greasy, so Use synonyms
this
type of Linking Words
Use synonyms
meals
tend to be addictive for society. Fix the agreement mistake
meal
To begin
with, many Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
fast Correct article usage
apply
food
Use synonyms
offers
ready Correct subject-verb agreement
offer
meals
because it is salty and delicious, so people tend to eat more. Use synonyms
Also
, many of these citizens tend to suffer from chronic diseases Linking Words
such
as obesity and arthritis due Linking Words
of
eating too much oil. Definitely, Change preposition
to
readymade
Use synonyms
food
is not prepared with healthy ingredients. Use synonyms
For instance
, in The United Linking Words
States
the majority of Add a comma
,States
the
society Correct article usage
apply
tend
to suffer from Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
obese
and high blood pressure due Replace the word
obesity
of
eating too much Change preposition
to
readymade
Use synonyms
food
.
To conclude, eating Use synonyms
readymade
dishes lead to several disadvantages Use synonyms
such
as suffering from Linking Words
obese
and chronic diseases due Replace the word
obesity
of
eating too much oil and salt, and some of the advantages of eating Change preposition
to
home
-made Use synonyms
meals
Use synonyms
is
that t Change the verb form
are
home
-made Use synonyms
food
is healthy and individuals can save some Use synonyms
money
, and Use synonyms
therefore
these type of Linking Words
food
is preferable to our society.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...