In many countries, some people live with their families while studying,but other students prefer to attend universities in other cities.Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantage?

The phenomenon of people tending to

study

and live in other cities during university education has aroused wide concern among wide circles. Divergent as people's views on

this

issue in question may be, it seems to me that

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to a new environment for

study

and completely living alone would bring us more advantages than disadvantages. Regarding the disadvantages of attending universities that are far away from

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hometown, the most significant reason is the extremally high cost. To

study

in other cities, some basic spending must to counted

such

as housing and insurance. It is a heavy burden for many normal families.

Moreover

, they can focus on learning only if they

study

at a local school because they have their parents to take care of anything outside of studying.

Therefore

, many parents prefer their children to stay beside them to

study

. Despite the aforementioned drawbacks, I still believe that

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benefits would outweigh the disadvantages. Of all the

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why people should go to other cities

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study

, the

first

one pop-up in my mind is that it is a valuable chance to allow children to learn to live independently. To illustrate, they have to learn how to maintain their body status which enforces them to gain new skills in life

such

as cooking and laundry.

In addition

,

this

will in turn widen their horizons by experiencing a new culture in a new place.

As a result

, they can develop their own version of the world but not only the views taught by their parents. Under

this

line of thinking, studying far away from family would bring make children independent and diversify their knowledge, and it is much more essential than extra expenditure.