Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to the young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is true that various companies put advertisements
to
every corner of our world in the case of promoting their products. Some Change preposition
in
people
think that it has a negative effect on Use synonyms
individuals
minds. Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
However
, others believe that the pros outweigh the cons. In my Linking Words
opinion
the right advertisement is the best way to promote a product. Add a comma
,opinion
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of Linking Words
commercial
and provide a logical conclusion.
On the positive side, Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
advertisement
increases companies' income and helps to raise the economy. Replace the word
advertising
In other words
, competent advertising attracts new customers. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
people
under the influence of advertising buy a product and involve new customers. To illustrate famous brand “Apple” spend a billion dollars in the case of promoting Use synonyms
their
products. Their Correct pronoun usage
its
last
product iPhone 14 was promoted Linking Words
in
different platforms Change preposition
on
such
as YouTube, Instagram and Linking Words
on
billboards. Change preposition
apply
As a result
, the company’s sales and revenue increased. Another advantage is that it makes Linking Words
people
's lives comfortable. Obviously, in the Use synonyms
21st
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21st-century
century
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,century
people
get Use synonyms
information
from phones. Use synonyms
Commercial
is one of the sources of useful Add an article
The commercial
information
. Use synonyms
For instance
, while surfing the web individuals can see Linking Words
information
about business courses, sign up for them and gain new knowledge.
But advertisement Use synonyms
also
has some major disadvantages like advocacy of harmful substances like cigarettes and alcohol. Linking Words
First
of all, teenagers who have sensitive Linking Words
psyche
can succumb to propaganda. Fix the agreement mistake
psyches
Moreover
, it can cause problems with health. Linking Words
For example
, commercials on the packaging of cigarettes Linking Words
which
warn about health problems Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
can cause. But it cannot stop Correct pronoun usage
they
the
smokers. Another drawback is that not all sources of Correct article usage
apply
information
taken from advertisements can be true. Use synonyms
Also
, there are a lot of Linking Words
fraud
and swindlers who want to deceive Fix the agreement mistake
frauds
people
and take their money. Namely, financial pyramids and bets. Individuals believe that they can easily earn money, but in Use synonyms
fact
they become victims of fraud, and bad advertising.
In conclusion, Add a comma
,fact
although
commercial can have certain negative effects like fake Linking Words
information
or advocacy, it has an extremely positive effect on Use synonyms
economy
and income. I believe that these benefits outweigh Correct article usage
the economy
its
drawbacks.Correct pronoun usage
their
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