some
people
believe that in
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generation will choose to
travel
on
holiday
in their
country
rather than
travel
to abroad. I completely disagree with
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because nowadays the globalization world often moves for word.
To commence with, nowadays
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industry has been increasing due to globalization.
Therefore
, many countries introduce
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.
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highest building, flower gardens and water
parks.
Therefore
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what they have through
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because they have
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marketing system. Due to that fact,
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that option.
Moreover
, some
people
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of cuisine and would
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experience with
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.
, some
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keen to get
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of weather
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For example
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due to get hot weather. Because in December they have winter Season and many are Europ nation dislike to spend
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in their
country
.
Otherwise
, when they are choosing to
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country
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rather than in their own countries.
when they could get more money while their exchange with development
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relaxation. Due to that
they often
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travel
abroad for
holiday
.
In conclusion, I believed that both domestic and international
travel
will give a different experience and the future
people
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their own countries.