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Something that private companies should be for pollution cleanup While others say it should be a government responsibility Discuss and state your own opinion.

#companies #pollution #cleanup #government #responsibility
The given table depicts the
percentage
 of
students
 who are female genders, who have a
first
language
not
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English
, and who are born outside Australia in six fields
such
 as
humanities
,
education
,
science
,
physics
, IT, and engineering
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an Australian University in 2011. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that IT and engineering areas have the highest
percentage
 of
students
 whose
first
language
 is not
English
 and coming from overseas countries.
Additionally
, the
Humanities
 department is the highest in terms of the proportion of female learners. According to the table, in the rest of the females, with 72%, the
humanities
 became the highest, following that, the
education
 department was the
second
 highest
percentage
 (68%). The proportion of
science
 and
physics
 fields did not exceed 60%. IT and engineering were at 17 and 15, respectively.
Nevertheless
, the IT area accounted for 49% of
students
 not speaking
English
 as their
first
language
 so it was the highest
percentage
 in
this
 aspect. 45% of
science
 learners and 42% of engineering pupils had the
first
language
not
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English
. And no more than 40% of
students
 in
physics
,
education
, and
humanities
 had a mother
language
 apart from
English
. With 56,
Physics
 and IT had the same proportion of
students
 being born outside Australia. The lowest
percentage
 of
students
 coming from other nations, except for Australia, was in the
humanities
 and
education
 areas (20% and 23%). Engineering took up 48% and
Science
 made up 31%.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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