Many cities replace farmlands and parks with houses.Is it positeive or negative?

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Farming
areas
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and public free spaces are replaced by residences and
this
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phenomenon can lead to severe social and environmental issues,
therefore
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I believe it is a negative impact. On the one hand, the depletion of agricultural lands can
caused
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cause
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negatively county's economy and
food
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security.
as a result
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of
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the unpresidented
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unpresidented
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unprecedented
population increase where particularly in
metropolise
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metropolises
metropolis
, the lands, where crops are grown dramatically are
reducced
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reduced
in order to
built
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build
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houses.
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,
country's
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the country's
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food
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production has decreased and
then
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mostly depends on imported
food
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. if a
counrty
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country
produce
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produces
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suffiecient
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sufficient
food
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for
their
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its
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people the country will ensure
food
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saftry
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safety
safely
.
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,
few
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a few
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years ago,
the
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apply
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large
areas
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of coconut lands were cleared by land sell companies,which
had
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led to
defiecency
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deficiency
of coconuts products,
becouse
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because
,
eventhough
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even though
demands
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demand
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of
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for
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coconuts
increeased
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increased
, supply decreased due to fewer productivity,
eventully
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eventually
,raw coconuts had been imported and it severely affected county's
econmy
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economy
.
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, the
residence's
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residents's
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physical and mental health can be affected by reducing the park
areas
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,
where
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which
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are used by
residences
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residents
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for outdoor activities
such
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as physical exercise , sports and family and friends
gathering
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gatherings
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, which contribute
people's
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to people's
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physical and mental stamina, For
instanse
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instance
, students who far from homes and family members are making new
frinds
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friends
in park
areas
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and it helps to
avoiding
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avoid
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longleness
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loneliness
.if reducing the free space, can lead
inceres
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in ceres
insurers
interest
to
mentally
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mental
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issue
such
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as depression
,.
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,
.
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moreover
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, health issues
such
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as obesity ,
high
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and high
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weigh
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weight
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can
incresed
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increased
increase
due to lack of physical
exercises
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exercise
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.
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, public spaces provide
greens
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green
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to the city and
it
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apply
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balances
eco systems
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ecosystems
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.
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, plants absorb carbon
dioxideds
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dioxide
dioxides
,which are mainly produced by
human
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humans
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and
influeces
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influences
influence
to global climate change, and
relese
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release
oxigen
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oxygen
, which ensure human secure respiratory in cities.
futhermore
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furthermore
,
tress
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trees
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are
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is
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sereved
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served
as
natural
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a natural
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barrier
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barriers
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for
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to
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noice
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noise
pollution. If reduce the park
ares
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areas
,
noice
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noise
pollution will be increased. In conclusion,
cities
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cities'
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public green
areas
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and
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family
faming
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farming
areas
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are
repalace
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replaced
replace
to
provde
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provide
accommodation for
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the incrasing
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increasing
incrasing
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increasing
population,
however
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,
this
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tend
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tends
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devastating to
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the environemt
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environment
environemt
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environment
environments
and people well behave hense I
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that
this
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is a negative development

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