In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies?

Nowadays, more and more teenagers acquiesce to the fact that spending their time earning money and gaining

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through discovering a new country during a gap year after graduating from high school is a better way to have

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than an educational institution.

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, the majority of parents are considering

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a waste of time with the main reason that the probability of getting a highly paid and decent job is relatively high with a diploma. The dispute has sparked a heated debate among people

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while having pros and cons on both sides of the equation.

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, I am strongly convinced that taking a gap year would lead to a positive impact on a student’s ability to adapt to a real-life situation and can make a huge difference in either personal or professional skills. There are several cogent reasons why proponents of a conventional way of building a carrier claim that it is better to study at

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educational institution with the main one being that in the past individuals could have a satisfying salary only by having a university degree. In fact,

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way is old-fashioned and doesn’t guarantee that you would get it that easy, even after finishing a

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in your country. In my point of view, employers demand

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of the possible worker more than the education he or she has. I contend that the best scenario after finishing school is to try yourself in different and distinct spheres

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while getting priceless

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and chasing the field in which a person is interested.

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, the advantage of taking a free year could help to relieve stress after an underestimated load of study. According to Harvard university about

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of students

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severe depression due to school exams. Suicide is flourishing by leaps and bounds due to

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exhaustive lifestyle which students often have In ,

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I believe that the notion that people ought to have at least a bachelor's degree is indeed positive, but recognizing the importance of relaxing and gaining

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, it is significant to encourage graduates to be wiser about their choice.