Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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would argue that
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connect
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with ecology should be solved on a global scale, while
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that is
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better to solve them locally. While
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solving environmental
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locally is
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and appropriate solution, I believe that
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connected with ecology should be solved worldwide. On the one hand, solving
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on a national scale is the best way with solving local environmental
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. It means that local citizens which live around the territory already know
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issues
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.
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, they already know which measures should be taken in order to solve
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, when
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problem
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is  being solved locally all the national
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want to contribute to
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, in Israel  state
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department
of ecology is divided
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departament
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department
which leads to quick
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, I believe that
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method doesn't solve the actual
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, because it can
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again.
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, solving ecological
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worldwide
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to stop developing and even close
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problems
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. All
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would take part in solving
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problem
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buy
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finding out the main trigger and
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planet would qualifier
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problem solving
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. As an example, the most popular ecological company named "Eco-green" has solved the garbage
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globally by only taking part
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humanity on
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Earth. I consider that
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method is preferable because it leads to total solving
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problem
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. In conclusion, while solving ecological
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is quick by knowing all ecological
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,
i
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think that solving
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this kind
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of
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problems
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globally leads to better
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of work.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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