Parents should not force their kids to choose a profession. To what extent do you agree?
It certainly cannot be denied that globalization helps students to choose different careers so they have a lot of opportunities these days their
parents
should not pressurize them for choosing only one career path. I partially agree with this
notion and as well as describe other aspects.
To commence with, it is common to have many different approaches in this
unstable world of technology; it is demanding various approaches and options to become successful in their life
. Parents
can help their kids to develop multiple strategies which lead to progress. For example
, a recent research students choose different courses to chase opportunities which is a common phenomenon in today's fast-developed world. Resulting, parental support must helpful for them.Thus
giving them a lot of attention is not good for them, parents
should not interfere with their decision; they learn from their own mistakes.
In contrast
, others think that choosing only one option in life
is better than multiple choices, their parents
should control their behaviour of learning because juveniles do have not much life
experience, so they sometimes face difficulties for the rest of life
; their guardians play a role as a mentor for them which give advice for perusing career paths. For example
: The daily newspaper showed how important is guardian support for a kid's life
. Hence
individuals must discuss with them whenever choose a profession.
In conclusion, although
choosing a career is a choice of an individual but do not overlook other paths and parental advice which is beneficial. Parents
are role models for their kids.Submitted by mahlyan.vs2111999 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite