Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. While others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion on this?

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, the majority think that having a good appearance is an important thing in life, but

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the

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minorities believe that

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activity is just a waste of salary. in my opinion, these statements

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a

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benefit

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each

community

. on the one hand, some

community

believe that having

a

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best suit is one thing that

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a big impact

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the personality, especially for some nation who work in a public area.

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, Nagita Slavina is the most popular artist in Indonesia, every single day she always shows in several programs

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every

channels

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. she always looks gorgeous with different

clothes

each

days

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. in that case, she is doing

this

for

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make

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the look more

interest

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in front of the viewers.

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, she is following the trending fashion to boost the

confident

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.

on the other hand

, other people

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argue that buying more secondary stuff just wasting

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money

. depending on

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situation, the

community

do not

using

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the

money

for buying

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clothes

and

jewellries

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jewelries

jewelleries

.

as a result

, the

community

just use the

money

for

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buy

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other stuff that

important

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in life.

for instance

,

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the youth who

living

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far from

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parents will save a lot of

the

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money

for buying a laptop to support their studies

that

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just buying

clothes

to wear

one

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or twice

in

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a month. in a nutshell, for some people who has enough

money

,

they

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will buy the

clothes

following

trending

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in the world and has a positive impact to boost their

confident

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confidence

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.

besides

that,

for

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some people who do not buy a lot of cloth usually use their

money

to buy other things

such

as

laptop

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a laptop

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to support their studies.