Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future careers and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All
subjects
are important in children's well-being. Some people argue that schools should only teach academic
subjects
which are more beneficial than other
subjects
such
as
music
and leisure activities; others, while, opposite approach. I completely disagree with
first
claim and revel others view points in forthcoming paragraphs and give an appropriate response to
this
essay. In my experience: all
subjects
are vital for school going children's and their future lives
also
. To be more specific, studying variety of
subjects
in school gives opportunities to make career in different fields.
In addition
to
this
, studying only academic
subjects
lead boring lives, yet studying
music
and playing
sports
give them relef from academic strees.
For example
: in a recent article describe how important is studying
sports
and
music
with other
subjects
and give a better result in their academic performance.
Thus
adding these
subjects
work as not only stress buster but
also
career option as well.
In contrast
this
view, other,
nevertheless
, think only focus on benifical
subjects
such
as math, science and computer programming which is better option for career rather than
music
industry or
sports
field, because of high income packages are provided by big multinational companies, which attract millions of people. These
subjects
have more benefits in overseas markets; development in computer science all over the globe.
Hence
these
subjects
assist them for fulfilling all desire in their life. In conclusion,
although
every subject is important for well-being of students, but due to increasing demands academic
subjects
have dominant role in the curriculum; but do not overlook
sports
and
music
benefits.
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