Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future careers and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
All
subjects
are important in children's well-being. Some people argue that schools should only teach academic subjects
which are more beneficial than other subjects
such
as music
and leisure activities; others, while, opposite approach. I completely disagree with first
claim and revel others view points in forthcoming paragraphs and give an appropriate response to this
essay.
In my experience: all subjects
are vital for school going children's and their future lives also
. To be more specific, studying variety of subjects
in school gives opportunities to make career in different fields. In addition
to this
, studying only academic subjects
lead boring lives, yet studying music
and playing sports
give them relef from academic strees. For example
: in a recent article describe how important is studying sports
and music
with other subjects
and give a better result in their academic performance. Thus
adding these subjects
work as not only stress buster but also
career option as well.
In contrast
this
view, other, nevertheless
, think only focus on benifical subjects
such
as math, science and computer programming which is better option for career rather than music
industry or sports
field, because of high income packages are provided by big multinational companies, which attract millions of people. These subjects
have more benefits in overseas markets; development in computer science all over the globe. Hence
these subjects
assist them for fulfilling all desire in their life.
In conclusion, although
every subject is important for well-being of students, but due to increasing demands academic subjects
have dominant role in the curriculum; but do not overlook sports
and music
benefits.Submitted by mahlyan.vs2111999 on
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