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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoo while others think that zoo are both entertainment and fun, discuss both the views and give Ur opinions.

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The problem of whether or not
people
 should close
zoos
 has sparked a heated debate. While some
people
 argue that the zoo should not be closed, I contend that it would lead to a negative impact on
animals
. The best
zoos
 try to recreate the natural environment,
although
this
 is never completely possible.
Therefore
, it is worth considering. There are two main reasons why
zoos
 need to be improved. One of them is that attempts to help endangered species. Paying visitors is the best way to finance the lives of
animals
.
For example
, the zoo can provide a medical service and there is
also
 no threat of starvation and predation. Another cogent reason for
this
 is that large predators can eat rare species of small
animals
. Which can lead to their extinction. I personally believe that
zoos
 are negative for several reasons with the main one being like a cage for poor
animals
, which are related to their natural life.
This
 is particularly undesirable because it would result in injury.
Animals
 need a lot of space, and lack of space affects how much
animals
.
Add a missing verb
are .
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 Sometimes
people
 against their will are squeezed all day long, constantly waking up during sleep. To conclude,
zoos
 would lead to a negative impact on the
animals
Change to a genitive case
animal's
animals'
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 world.
However
 recognizing the importance of
animals
, it is advisable to encourage
people
 to be kind to them and treat them with respect.
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