Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is a rising amount of people with health problems, who believe that the effect of

alternative

treatment is exceeding professional doctors’ treatment those days.

This

essay will demonstrate why I consider

alternative

medicine

as a positive development due to the experience of

ancestors

and the organic compounds that it is

comprises

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of all, our

further

ancestors

were

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using

this

type of medicament and ,

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their body was firm and healthy and their immune system was persistent to the different diseases back

then

. Healers were able to produce effective

medicine

during the war times and well-treated warriors were able to fight the

next

day.

For instance

, my mother

also

used to put a special salve on my skin which was made out of sheep’s skin’s oil layer when I got hurt. That used to give an instant result on my injuries. That means, that

alternative

medicine

is efficient and was proven by our

ancestors

.

Secondly

, I consider

alternative

medicine

as a positive development because of its structure of it. They can consist of organic plants and natural herbage which can positively affect our well-being.

For example

, if we will boil the leaves of lavender and make tea out of it, it will pacify our pressured muscles and help us to relax.

Such

simple organic moisture already has an excellent impact on our health. In conclusion, I would say that the natural blend can never harm a person, quite opposite, it is a good

alternative

treatment which was verified and approved by our

ancestors

.