A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

Dear Dave I hope

this

letter finds you well. Thank you again for your kindness and

this

opportunity to rely on you, my friend with

this

duty. I will describe to you all the main functions but If you are stuck with any problems or have any questions, feel free to call on a number which you know. According to our arrangement, I write

this

letter just as a small reminder. And you will know an instruction on how to take care of my

dog

more precisely. As you are already inside my flat and reading

this

you should open a window in a room

to the dining room where the

dog

sleeps. You need to do it always after night and leave it open

during

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your outside with pet.

Also

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you should walk with a

dog

at least twice a day unless you are ready to clean up my carpet every morning after shit. And try to feed him after every

walking

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walk

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. In the

kitchen

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beside a

fridge

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you will find

dog

food in

a packages

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a package

packages

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. There is a receipt on the backside of each one. Just combine it with a fresh

meet

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meat

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which I ask you to buy. I left some money on the table there and you can use it for the

dog

's meat meal and for coffee

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yourself during your walk. And

last

, as I said you

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do no

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need to clean but I ask you to brush

dog's

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the dog's

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carpet at the end of the week, once only. That's all for now. I hope I was clear and you will enjoy it as I am.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

273 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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